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Tessa's Weak Storyline

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Rose
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« on: October 08, 2018, 08:42:40 pm »

How can anyone believe this weak storyline for Tessa?  She's supposedly got people blackmailing her for money, but we never see them and never hear any threats.  Really?  Does anyone believe her other than Mariah?  Get a brain already, Mariah!!!
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« Reply #1 on: October 08, 2018, 08:58:00 pm »

How can this s/l be improved?
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Lynn1
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« Reply #2 on: October 08, 2018, 09:07:20 pm »

How can this s/l be improved?

Either write out Tessa, or show us the actual people threatening her.  She's conveniently on her own and people supposedly hear her in distress on the phone, but no one's actually witnessed her being harassed.  Viewers might be more sympathetic if they saw the threat was real.  The writers could also show us that Tessa is more concerned about the threats.  Whenever she says the money is no big deal, it gives off the impression that she doesn't care about the shakedown.
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